Whoa! You're with Eleps! Nice work! The mixing and mastering and very clean Good Job!
U bois will gonna rule the world with ur musika!
Whoa! You're with Eleps! Nice work! The mixing and mastering and very clean Good Job!
U bois will gonna rule the world with ur musika!
I really enjoyed the track! The instruments needs more improvements though it is good. The only problem I can see is that the vocals needs WAY MORE improvements:
Technically, your placing is in the upper palate, which is good, because it adds oomph to the voice, and it sounds more like arabian chanting. Since your placing is in the upper palate, it tends to vibrate in the nasal part, which offs it a bit. Also, your breathing, needs more improvements. When you're pronouncing for a word, do not drain the air for one word. Save it. Because if not, you will flat in some parts because there is no air to pusg your diaphragm to hit the right note. It is also the same with being shaky and pitchy. Other than that, you have a good voice quality! Nice remix!
That is something I shall hold on to for future vox work. Thank you for the thorough review! 💖
Nice one! The only thing you can improve is that, the song needs parts. Not always sounds like the drop. You need to put breaks, verses, intro or even outro. In that way, it may be interesting.
Thanks! I've heard that a lot and it's kinda true. Maybe flows too well? But yea, I'm workin on it. Glad you Like and thanks for the feedback!
-Dapie
I really love this piece! You are bouncing with your skills in exponential way!
Thanks! :D
Nice attempt! I think you just really need to work on the reverb. Watch more orchestral performances and observe how reverb works. Also the string in the beginning is very dry and loud. When you are remixing an electronic to an orchestral, you need to work on the blending and the smooth flow of the orchestration.
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Nice work! Sounds like Zomboy here!
Nice piece! Very humanistic and natural! The reverb is better than before!
Hi Uxvellda,
Thank you very much for the comment!
Nice SFX's! The mix and transitions are good! It is very fun to listen to!
Thank you!
Nice one there! The atmosphere is very fun! Just limit the treble so that it may sound clearer and distinguishable. And the drops, reduce the too much white noise. Other than that nice job!
An artist who strives to create music not heard by the ears, but listened by the heart.
Age 19
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Rizal National Science HS
Rizal, Philippines
Joined on 1/3/18