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Japanese Enya? Nice job Troisnyx and Jessie Yun! I love these!

Troisnyx responds:

Cheers, though we're not the only ones. There's loads more who worked on this; we're currently the only two on NG.

I like magnets. Your song is a magnet. Therefore I like your song!

DerpcatOfficial responds:

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The melody is very dominant all over the song. And it is very redundant and repeatative. Needs more improvement for mixing and mastering and needs more variations. The song is leaning too much in the treble. But thanks anyway for making me your inspiration.

Fantastic Job! I really enjoyed it! The epicness roams the room! The problems I can see is that some of the brasses that are in the lower register seems to be distorting the other higher registered instruments. You must use compressors or similar effect plugins for dynamics. But you have grown from Garageband to FL Studio! Other than that, the melody is so moving. Nice attempt!

JessieYun responds:

Hi Uxvellda,
Thanks a lot for the comment! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
And thank you for the suggestion. The low brass were the key for this track, and I tried to make it blend into the rest of the instruments as best as I can, but I guess it didn't work properly. I'll try to enhance it in the future!

I love the feeling of the orchestra! You worked well with this. Good Job! The sound gave the real reason of love so nice work with that!

DerpcatOfficial responds:

yeeeet <3 <3

Sounds a lot like Au5, I think that is the product of Serum... Better than the original. You added more texture than that of the original, though.

Nice work you have done! The sound design quite improves! The drop needs more low notes below the saw synths, I think another smooth instruments, and also the subbass. Overall, it is nice! Good Job!

ShockblastDeluxe responds:

Thanks!

Nice try, though! I have observed that you derived the musical influence from the Armor of God. (And whatever you did in the title, it is blasphemy, LOL)

Technically speaking, you are full of potential. But the aspects of it, you lacked mastering/mixing techniques. In the beginning, the piano is very lonely. I think you should add some oozing pad, or orchestral string, in order to fill up the space or emptiness of sound.

Also, the distortions pulls down whatever epicness is happening. The drops needs more clarity. I think, the too much reverbation of synths drowns each and every aspects of the drop. In order to prevent distortions, especially when the kick strikes, sidechain the subbass with the signal to the kick. It is like dodging effect of volume of subbass, so that the lower territory of frequency will only host one instrument at a time, such as the kick. You can also do that in the synths and bass. You can peak the mid in the EQ, so that there is no feedback of bass will happen, that may result again to distortion. You can also peak the low mid in snare, in order to add oomph to your kick.

Other than that, I've enjoyed the track. Goodluck for your future productions. I hope you learned a lot. Still, I have just entered this realm, such as Newgrounds. But I am an artist that is VERY SIMILAR to XTRULLOR. He is a friend of mine. I have also read that you are very inspired by Xtrullor. Are you interested in a collab? I will teach you how to do lroduction like him... PM me if you are interested.

MysteriousPresence responds:

Thank you my friend for the kind words and helpful advice ! Unfortunately I had absolutely no time to compose anything since last year, so it may be difficult for me to make a collab, but I am touched by the proposal nonetheless.

aND YES IT4S BLASPHEMY LOL ;DDDDDDDDDDDDD

Nice work! Mind if I can remix it into Xtrullor style song, I'll give you full credits. Can I remix it?

Basses are nice! Mastering, especially the drums are weak. Try to amplify kick, together with EQing it, with the higher amount of mid. Also the snare, needs more low mid. The variations are a little pingpongish style, and really mediocric. Other than that, nice try!

An artist who strives to create music not heard by the ears, but listened by the heart.

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Rizal National Science HS

Rizal, Philippines

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